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Mark ‘Dezm’ Sylva, one of my long-time pre-readers, is very good at his job. He catches my errors and keeps my mythos straight. But occasionally, he gets carried away. Take this week’s chapter of Deluge, for example. The starfish-man has a tentacle for a penis. Originally, he was just supposed to have a regular penis. But that wasn’t good enough for Dezm. See his notes, diagrams, and the accompanying email, below:
“We get monster penis in Ghoul, Dark Hollow, Urban Gothic, and Castaways. We don’t need more. Hell, if it’s got a starfish as a head why not put a moray eel or electric eel between it’s legs. I can see an electric eel darting out and biting down on it’s victim to electrocute it to give the starfish head time to do it’s job. Too much? I can’t believe I’m writing up a correction about monster dicks.“